Maybe you should expand on this.
This vid is 2 years old and I've seen it before. You seem to know that it's kinda rough around the edges since it was your first submission. I honestly think you should make a new random act of violence. I would advise laying off of the "Gay Cracka wha wha" humor. For some reason it turns a lot of people off to submissions, including myself. I stuck around and gave you the benefit of the doubt though. Like I said, maybe if you continued the storyline or lack there of with another random act, and funnier or similar humor - this could become a hit. Keep it in mind.